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Hey CaptianRandom. I really like these quotes. There good, and they make you think. It's not what many people would write, and it is good that it has your own ...

I have no idea why I write these, but on request, here is another. (Strange and delusional.) --------------------------------------------- I hear the cry like a piercing howl, as it strikes deep ...

Hey. I thought this poem was, nice. It was good, but it could have been better. I did enjoy it when I read it, but I agree with flower, that ...

Hey. This is a really good poem. It is a lot like something I would write. It has a good imagery of the flower, and what it really is. One ...

Hey. Firstly, I think the ratio is more like 2:1 now, but I may be wrong too. I did like this poem, and it is good for a first try. ...

Hey. I think that this is great. It is short, and doesn't drag on, and it's right to the point. What I really like, is the last too lines. It ...

Go for it. Burn me alive. Then tell me what I can do better. --------------------------------------- I will never write for you again, for your heart is cold and stone. You ...

Hey. This is a really good poem. I think it has really good imagery, and meaning. But I do also agree that it can be worked on. I think though, ...

I walked across the sandy beach, and far away I could see, the shining sun ascending high, over the beautiful sea. Burning bright like a shining jewel, it broke through ...

This is a really old poem, that I wrote a while ago, but lost. It's not that great, but I can try make it better. --------------------------------- The world is my ...

Hey. This is a good poem. It is descriptive, and paints an image, but you might want to elaborate on what you are saying. You say nothing about the rose ...

Hey. I like this poem. It isn't a common theme to use, but it is still good. The only thing I have to say it that maybe you shouldn't break ...

Every day, people cry tears of blood. The weeping find no comfort, and those who sob for pleasure, are comforted by only themselves. But the seas are filled with the ...

It's not that great, so go, shred it, burn it, shoot it. Then please tell me what I can do better. Every day, I stand alone. Every night, I wonder ...

Hey. I like that this is short. Most people say that things are too short, and the make poems drag on forever. What I am wondering though, is who is ...