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I wrote this a few weeks ago. I haven't posted anything here in a while, so I'll start off with this. Hope you enjoy it. ------------------------------- Have you ever felt ...

Sorry that this isn't great. It's just something I wrote to get me back onto YWS. ------------------------------- Have you ever hear an angel cry, while it sang it's mournful tune? ...

I think I shall be leaving YWS for at least a month but most likely more. Goodbye to all.

Here's chapter 4. Hope it's not too bad. ---------------------------- I staggered and fell to the floor, as I heard the squeals of Sarah, who was almost breaking the bones in ...

Just something random I wrote. --------------------------- I hear the whispers in my ear, they try to avoid my eyes. They know the secrets that I kept, but now are lose ...

This is the next chapter. I was going to keep going on this chapter, but it was getting rather long, so I made it the start of the next chapter. ...

Sorry, this chapter is a little bland, but every novel has these chapters. ----------------------------- ‘There is a place I’ve heard of in the city. Do you want to go there?’ ...

The soft sound of water in the washing machine echoed the rain in the street. It fell like waves crashing on the beach in the middle of the storm. Every ...

Hey Lance, firstly, welcome to YWS. This is really good for a first post. I thought that it was well thought and had good description. I just think that if ...

This isn't that great, and I wrote it a while ago, but I hadn't posted anything in a while, and thought I could make it better. -------------------------- I'd told you ...

Hey. This was a really good poem. I thought it was in depth and that it was also written really well. But the rhythm in places wasn't the best. I ...

Hey. First off, I have to say that I thought that you thought of a really good theme for this poem. I thought that it started off really well, and ...

Hey. Here for the review... But I also got a really good read. I thought that this poem was really good. I thought that it flowed really well, and it ...

Hey. I thought that this poem was quite good. My personal opinion, is that grammar and capitalized letters are the author's choice for a poem, and that the repetition of ...

Hey. When I saw the title, I thought that it was going to be different. But I thought that this was really good. I thought that it was well thought ...