*mutters under his breath* Jesus why does this feel like a dating profile...
oh, hello there! I am Stephen! An extremely pretentious Junior in high school looking for a way to get better at writing poetry and short stories; as my true artistic passion (theater) is currently in a bit of a lull. Though criticism is appreciated... I can take it
and I certainly won't be holding any punches when it comes to my critiques. 
side note: my punctuation is and always has been atrocious so commentary on content is what would be most helpful
oh, hello there! I am Stephen! An extremely pretentious Junior in high school looking for a way to get better at writing poetry and short stories; as my true artistic passion (theater) is currently in a bit of a lull. Though criticism is appreciated... I can take it
and I certainly won't be holding any punches when it comes to my critiques. side note: my punctuation is and always has been atrocious so commentary on content is what would be most helpful