kimalane21

this is a very sad poem. i like it overall, but some of the lines don't flow very well, particularly at the beginning. maybe it's just the way im reading ...

There's a black hole where there should be a beat, Eating all my emotions and feelings Causing me stagger, stumble, and cry, Feeling so heavy, making me sigh Feelings march ...

i absolutely love your poem i feel the same way about math

i really love your poem you're an awesome writer :)

this is a great piece of poetry, i love the rhyme scheme and the impression it leaves on the reader is very moving and unforgettable

it's goodbut it just needs something....more. i feel like theres something missing from the overall explaination of the three men. develop it a bit more, and it will be very ...