kimalane21

this is an amazing poem! it reminds me a little bit of humpty dumpty, only a bit more dramatic. i love the rhyme scheme as well, it really makes the ...

aw i love this poem! i absolutely hate spiders they creep me out. i do like the one leg to touch (and so on) part in the beginning i think ...

i totally love this poem!!! it reminds me a lot of me and my boyfriend. it also reminds me of a song. Keep writing amazing stuff like this!!

you know, writingfromtheheart, just because somebody likes vampires and thinks they're cool doesnt mean they are obssesed with the twilight books. i really really hate those books and i don't ...

The humans surrounding me every day, Tempt me in such a terrible way, Because of that blood that pumps through their veins, Powering their hearts, their minds, and brains What ...

this poem is awesome! it makes me miss spring my school has already had 7 snow days from all the snow we've gotten :(

sorry i forgot to put this on my last post, but i think with a little tweaking, your poem could be amazing! it seems like you're a really good writer, ...

We are the ones, you laugh at and scorn. We are the ones, still playing with toys. I really don't like this line it doesn't flow well and seems akward ...

What hurts the most Is what's untrue The thing that's haunting Is me without you. Right now my world is perfect My smile is not pretend But how long 'till ...

i didnt like this much. it was good, but it just doesn't feel complete to me. the first stanza was really confusing, and the second stanza...where did that come from? ...

i really like this poem, however i think it could be longer, and not so rhymey. I think a little bit of rhyming in this poem is really good, but ...

i really like your poem,,, but i don't really think the title goes with it. i mean, maybe in the beginning, but after it kind of goes astray. as for ...

i like this poem, it reminds me of the book The Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka we just finished reading in my english class. i really like the concept you have ...

wow this is a really great poem :) i like how practically every line has a simile in it. it's a really good poem you're an awesome writer

this is a great poem :) i really like it. i get the sense that you like to do good in school, and you're mad about not getting a good ...