kimalane21

This was written at a request from my friend, and she loved it, so I thought I'd post it up :) Woe Every day I walk around here, Seeing the ...

There's just a few little things that's been runnin' through my mind, and I'm trying not to choke on the lack of evidence I find. And I cannot comprehend how ...

Hint hint Sniok, not to be rude, but its called A Letter to the World. It's supposed to read like that.

The Realization I'm sorry I ever hurt you, I really meant no harm. Just listen to what I have to say About the feeling in my heart. You mean more ...

A Letter to the World So many people discriminate, Against so many different things, But the one that affects me most, Is discrimination against LGBT's. I understand it seems unnatural, ...

A worried urgency slowly crept across his eyes, causeING the usual electric blue to become more subdued and sullen. cause is not in the right particable. What once might have ...

"The violinists bow ed , poised and ready to begin, and created a dense forest with a small platform at the heart." no need for the apostraphe, and bow does ...

How would you feel if entire cultures began teaching their children that you and anyone who looks like you are evil and wanted nothing but to rip their heart out ...

great job! your poem reminds me of two-face, one of the villians who lives in batman's gotham city. im such a nerd :) but i really like, only one critisism..the ...

omg this is an amazing poem! the title really drew me in and i really like how you start the poem with the old saying "curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction ...

you as your own person is important in every single way this line is ment to say "is" not "are" because it's not talking about a person its saying your ...

This poem was inspired by this quote: "To be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you like everybodt else, is ...

awesome work! i love how abstract the character is. it really does give the impression that whoever this is has just been suprised, or startled by something. i also like ...

A pair of shady zealous eyes, Chase the soaring of the sun, They still glimmer in their tries, To watch the dawn before its gone. If you're going for rhyming ...

i really like this poem, but something seemed a little off to me. maybe make it a bit longer, or go into more detail about this friend? it ends a ...