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Re: In the Shadows
I really enjoyed this poem. I usually don't like rhyming poetry, I find it takes away from the poem, but in this case I found it soo fluid and think ...
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Re: "Do not leave me"
I really like this. It's full of emotions, maybe you might want to elaborate, I felt like I was being hit by a bolder in the first line, then it ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Twelve Thousand Things I Want To Say
I'd write them in a long epic, And sleep with it under my pillow at night I'd hold you in my arms, like a true romantic Whispering deadly secrets while ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Hello Everyone(:
Hi! I'm Delaney, but I go by Lanes[: I'm from the US, New jerseyy. I'm 14, fifteen in a few months, yay. I love writing, and thought YWS looked pretty ...
Feb 17, 2009
