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Re: If Only (Updated!)
Since this is the beginning of the story, we need to start getting connected to the characters.. make us see what they are seeing by putting more description into things ...
Apr 5, 2008
Since this is the beginning of the story, we need to start getting connected to the characters.. make us see what they are seeing by putting more description into things ...
Apr 5, 2008
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