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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: If Only (Updated!)

    Since this is the beginning of the story, we need to start getting connected to the characters.. make us see what they are seeing by putting more description into things ...

    Apr 5, 2008


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault