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Re: Puppeteer
sicklee wrote: I agree with KatTrain - this poem is all tell and no show. You don't even tell what happened - you exaggerate it so much that I'm not ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Your Photograph
There's not much for me to review because most of the reviews part is pretty much covered. All of all, I want to say this is a good work. Try ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: I never like my name
thegilliangill wrote: Good luck for the contest I'm going to review your work here I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named after ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: I never like my name
thegilliangill wrote: Good luck for the contest I'm going to review your work here I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named after ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Together
Jaz wrote : I usually really like carefully chosen detail in short stories like this but also appreciate the way that saying little is sometimes far more effective. What's left ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Importante Tips~~~
Navita wrote: Great tips, Hibiscus. I have recently seen a surge of reviews demanding such unecessary things as punctuation and capitalisation, so I think this post is rather timely. I ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Wisdom Told Me
KatTrain wrote: Wisdom. The way your insight ignites, school's just a launching site. Straight path, you choose to curve hard right. Wisdom (and patience). Annoying how it's acquired by insipid ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
LibbyLovesDrumswrote: AsxLoversxGo wrote: At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: The New Begining
I have nothing more to say because KAH and SlientRain had cover everything. Overall, this is a good one and I enjoed reading it. The part that I liked the ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter Rapping Battle
Noelle wrote: This is so cool!! Great job. I am an ultimate Harry Potter superfan so I was really happy you wrote this. It's great I agree with Noelle. I'm ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Heaven Shunned
I have nothing more to say because KatTrain had covered everything. Why don't you try write something different? Here's a tip for you. Feelings, imagination and mind. With those three ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: I cried
kingolions wrote: Hey. When I saw the title, I thought that it was going to be different. But I thought that this was really good. I thought that it was ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
ImABookPerson wrote : Calli! your pretty! :3 i absolutely love your hair I totally agree with you book!
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Theokrone (A small excerpt from my fantasy novel debut)
Greetings, This is a very good starting! I think it's okay and please post the other chapters when you're done writing it. And most of all, I would like to ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Dear Today
I love it. Pretty cool one. Keep writing, Alicia.
Oct 5, 2010