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emmylou1995 wrote: I think this poem is good, but it could be better. Add more imagery, add emotion. Don't repeat stanzas like you did as well. If you add imagery ...

IceCreamMan wrote: This is awesome! I don't agree with Abigail (nothing personal, of course)...the use of "feet" in the poem is perfect. There is no reason to change that; in ...

MikaFreak123 wrote: I think I know what you are talking about here. And I sincerely hope it's not about you. I like the repeating of "This is my love" But ...

Looks like XChangeX and sliented1 had covered most of the reviews part. The tittle kind of bothered me. Anyway, just keep on writing to improve your writings. Good luck and ...

Hey there, there's not much for left for me to review. The reviews part is pretty much covered. Overall, I enjoyed reading it but the metaphor of "dead fish" kind ...

There's nothing much left for me to review because the reviews part is pretty much covered. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Continue writing to improve your writings. Keep writing because ...

MikaFreak123 wrote: I really really like this. Not only because I can relate but because of the way it is written. I like the short lines, they short of give ...

I agree with everyone.

Hey there! Seems like there's not much for me to review because the reviews part is pretty much covered. I think if you continue writing, you can write even better ...

Hey there, Looks like there's nothing much for me to review because Jetpack and Alzora had cover almost everything for the review part. I just want to say that you ...

Hello, this poem is kind of short but it's okay. But continue writing to make it better. I know you can do it. All in all, I enjoyed reading it. ...

theXunseen wrote : I love it!!! Peter Pan is one of my favorite stories. There have been so many different takes on the story, and I love your perspective. There ...

I feel really bad for peoples like this. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing because you can write really well. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.

RedRaven wrote: This was fun to read! I liked that it was upbeat and happy. I am another one of those writers who writes a lot of dark, heavy material, ...

Alzora wrote : Wow, I had no idea people could actually think up songs like that... YOU'RE AMAZING!! This is a cool song, I wish I could hear it sung... ...