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This is such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will write more like this. I just loved it. Overall, it's a very good poem. ...

I agree with everyone. At first, when I was new here, I was confused about the same thing. I have not much to say here because everyone had said what ...

Lumi wrote: This is so cute and succinct! I love it with all of my heart. You know what you're doing here, so there's no call for a nit-pick review, ...

Hello! Well, the reviews is pretty much covered. I just want to say I really enjoyed reading it. The poem is beautiful and paints a lovely picture. It's wonderful and ...

kaiden wrote: Wow nice. Very cool. Definitely a "I'll give all my love to you" kind of poem. Interesting. I like the rhythm and rhyming here. I thought it flowed ...

Hey there, this is a good poem. I enjoyed reading it. I hope that you will post more poems. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.

rainistheskystears wrote: Oh i love this! The way you dercibe your emotions is great. Also im glad you didnt try to make this rhyme, like alot of people try to ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society. ladypurple wrote: THE UNKNOWN KNOWN WAS KNOWN BY THE UNKNOWN KNOWN . MAYENDE JOEL SIRONDA. Weird tounge twister. I wouldn't recommend CAPS LOCK. It seems ...

Hey there, about your poem, it's a little annoying if you keep on repeating the same words. We used to live inside a fairy tale-- With colors, music, life and ...

I really enjoyed reading this. At first, I thought it was someone lost and looking for love but as I continue reading it, I found it's actually about the environment. ...

I like it. It's really cute about the teddy bear. Even it's short but I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing poems. You can write poems if you follow your ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! Okay, I would like to say something about this part. All I’ve lived was a lie. I believed me when you said, “I love you.” ...

Hey there Alzora, I like it. Calligraphy had done pretty much reviews for this poem and she already covered what I want to review about this poem. Just write more ...

Hey there, first of all welcome to YWS! I hope that you will enjoyed writing and post most of your stories here. You try and try to get inside, I ...

Hello, I have not much to say here since lumi had covered pretty much at the reviews part. Anyway, I enjoyed reading it but you need to writing more to ...