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Re: Alone again.
Hello Chynelk5, I know how it feels like to be emo and I like it. I no longer want to notice . I think it's better if you write want ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Cry
Hello Dreams, Your tittle is really simple. So I decide to read it. Your poem flows really well. I can see fear and I can see fate I think you ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: a vampire's greeting
Welcome GummyBearEater. I'm Alicia but here I'm known as Kiki. What sort of things do you write? I hope that you enjoyed your stay. Good luck, Alicia.
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Who Knows?
ZLYF wrote:is this supposed to rhyme? feels like there something wrong with the way it joins XD abba315 wrote: How far would I go for you? Maybe I’ve become immune ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: How some people learn
Hello, this is funny. I enjoyed reading it. This can be a joke and write more. You have to believe that you can write because you can. Good luck and ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Where the eagles fly...
Hello, this is great. It's flows really well. You did a nice job. Write more because I liked writing this. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: "EDITED" It kills me to know
It kills me to know that there is nothing I can do to this feeling I shall not subdue My heart is in pain and sorrow but the reason I ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Let me go
Hey there. Looks like there's not much for me to review since the review part is pretty much covered.I enjoyed reading it. I really like it. Keep writing to improve ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: I Won't Give Up
Thank you for the reviews. Maybe it looked like a poem but actually it's a part of my song.I wrote it when I was eleven. I just found it when ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Everything but the truth
Hibiscus wrote: You are nothing but a fairytale Is fiction not a crime? A gripping tale of courage, Your lies are like a chime. If you where as noble, As ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: LIAR
Hello Blossom. (Okay, you really reminds me of my favorite powerpuffgirls! LOL) I agree with everyone. There's some misspelling words like embrace and realize. But other than that, it's a ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: I Won't Give Up
I will believe in my dreams No matter what happens to me I promise myself that I won't give up I don't care what people say about me Why should ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: "Forgot the Cold"
Oh my gosh! I just loved it! I wish I could heard it sung. I found myself singing it even I don't know the notes. I think it's great. I ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: To write Love On her Arms
Lumi wrote: I saw this in the new post feed and I had to comment on it. To Write Love on Her Arms is an organization that is very dear ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Diary
I don't have much to say since the reviews part is much covered. Anyway, this is a really good poem and I enjoyed reading it. Continue writing to make it ...
Oct 8, 2010
