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Re: Hi Im new:)
Hello Lindsey! My name is Alicia but most people here call me Kiki. I'm 13 years old and I hope that you enjoy your stay at this site. How did ...
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Re: You.
Crimsona wrote: This is a very sweet poem that would definately deserve its place in someones love letter, but it's a little cliche and I have heard pretty similer poems ...
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Re: Bits and pieces
Hello, I liked the "How The Pen Fell". Anyway, I think most of it is kind of good. Will just keep writing to write even better. Keep writing, Alicia.
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Re: You've Got A Friend In Me.
Hello and welcome to the Young Writers Society! How did you found this website? And do you enjoyed staying at this site? Here's a little that I want to review. ...
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Re: Life In the Eyes Of a Godless Man
DanneilleLoveSong wrote: That was a really good poem. I normally don't care for really short poems but I really liked this. It short, sweet, and to the point. You did ...
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Re: Will never lasts forever
Hello Truth, thanks for the review and for the suggestions too.
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: A Quarrel behind the Door.
Hey there, I got a suggestion for you, why don't you make the font that you're using a bit bigger? It's kind of hard to read it. Good luck, Kiki.
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Re: Last Art Dump
ImABookPerson wrote:Jent! Did you draw all this? Because they're amazing!! :O Its like awesome! You can really draw! (unlike me ) Anyway, thanks for the PM, or not I would ...
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Re: Simply Me
Oh I just love it. I wish I could hear it been sung. I like this part. Heres what i forgot to mention. because it's not yours to care, you ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Hera's Curse
Hey there, I don't know much about the legend, but I love this poem. A curse, I think it's good. Nice write but there is no true flow to the ...
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: My Eyes See You.
I just love it! It really touch my heart. You definately have the talent to write. Keep writing because everyone likes your writing. Good luck and keep writing, Alicia.
Nov 1, 2010 -
Re: Will never lasts forever
I have no idea what I'm writing. If it does make sense, tell me. :? I thought our friendship was strong But I was all wrong I'm still young To ...
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Re: Time
SofiaDesu wrote:I just noticed that you are 13. Then it is very, very good for your age. I would say, it is exellent. I would never say that it was ...
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Re: The Nature Of Art
Hello! I like your haiku. And I love art. Bend and curve like warped in space I love this part. The grass grows green to I think there's something missing ...
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Re: Why
Because the three guys is an elf and were playing hide and seek. Why were they playing hide and seek?
Nov 1, 2010
