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Hello and welcome to Young Writers Society! I enjoyed reading it. I like the intro but it's kind of disturbing when you keep on repeating it over and over again. ...

shanan-cat wrote: Oh, very unique! Although, very different.... I think that most people understand that when reading a poem, you count the syllables in your head. I thinks it's actually ...

Hello and welcome to the site! I hope you enjoy your stay! I like this part Put me down before I hurt someone. But I don't really understand what you ...

Hey there! I don't think this poem is too long. I liked this poem. There's a lot of "promise" in it. So, don't look behind that curtain, Don't pull back ...

Hello, forgive me if I come off me,this poem is a little too cliche to be deep but i like the last line "I wonder, if he loves me." Anyway, ...

I'm trapped in a room That's dark as black With no doors And windows. I miss the sunshine And the warm air While it's cold as dead In this place. ...

Hello, I think this is okay. I liked it. AquaMarine wrote that it's not totally original but I liked the meaning of the lyrics. I founded myself singing it in ...

fading-dream wrote: You have captured what many authors fail at. The writing is not about capitalization and punctuation but about rhythm, feeling, flow. You have succeeded wonderfully. I love the ...

Thanks for the review. I thought that no one will review this.

Hello! This is my first short story that I publish here. It's a letter. My dearest Kayla, I've got a lot to tell you but it seems like the time ...

Flower~Child wrote :Hey there, Flow here and I will be your reviewer. I hope you have been enjoying the site so far. Please don't take my review as harsh because ...

Sakuragirl1 wrote : That's really cool. We've been told our whole lives were going to use math, and you just showed that in a cool way. Keep Writing! I totally ...

retrodisco666 wrote :I don't care if other people see things wrong in this. I wish I could write that good, because that was amazing. I absolutely love it. I like ...

Emalily wrote:I like the idea of the song, but I think you could make it better. I don't like the line AsxLoversxGo wrote: Now you’re six feet in the ground/ ...

Hi Kimberleigh, welcome to YWS! I'm Alicia and I'm from Asia. I'm 13 years old. Just pm me if you have any questions or if there's anything for me to ...