kikialicia31

You should try to use more imagery; like similes, metaphors and images. You know, that sensory stuff and I just want to ask this, how do you hate yourself? And ...

Alright, I see that grammar has pretty much been covered, however, I do think you need some puncuation at the end of lines. But keep on writing because practice makes ...

Thanks for the reviews and I was doing this in my class so I can't really think straight.

This is a beautiful photo and I sure hope you keep on doing photography!

It's good but sorry to say this. It's kind of a little too short.

This poetry is dedicated to a friend of mine. How could you, Leave me alone, Crying , Without any love? How could you, Think I'm happy, With this kind of ...

This poem is okay but I don't like the way things keep repeating through the poem, I just didn't get the impact that I think it should have had. It's ...

It's very cute but I catch one or two mistakes in it. Example like this one. "No, Adam. You're not a stranger... YOU ARE MY FAIRY GODMOTHER and you're here ...