kikialicia31

Oh, This is a very good story! I like it and I could imagine myself as Elizabeth. Keep on writing because I believe that you can write. Please tell me ...

Hey there, As I climb up that mountain. That stands so tall. I feel so alone. I’m the weakest of all. I am certainly the kind. That no one looks ...

It's very good. The poem flows very well and I liked it. If you write more poem or just anything, pm me because I want to read more of your ...

I'm sorry to say this but I think this poem is a bit annoying. Try to read it out loud and you might find it's a little annoying. Anyway write ...

Welcome to YWS! The first thing I think when I start writing this poem, it must be for Michael Jackson right? Anyway it's a good poem and I liked it. ...

Day wrote: I agree with this. foxy wrote: I keep feeling that you have something missing. Your ideas are great but you don't seem to describe them in the best ...

I liked the end of this poem. Here I stand, here Sound a little bit funny. it's better if you remove the here . It will be much better. Anyway, ...

AsxLoversxGo wrote: This reminds me of a Shakespearian Sonnet, "My Mistresses Eyes Are Nothing Like the Sun" I believe. I can't remember the number. I think it's his most romantic ...

Congrats on your first poem book! It's the first time and take it easy okay? The poem is okay to me and I believe that you have the talent to ...

It's a good poem. If you continue writing more you can write even better than this. Keep Writing, kikialicia31

Hi, I like how you line flows. And I don't have much to say here but I just like how your poem flows.

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Hey, it's a good one and I hope that you will continue writing. I know you can write and you just have to keep on trying okay? And please tell ...

Hey Book, it's very touching and most of the correction had been review by others so I don't have much to say here. But keep on writing because i want ...

This poem is kind of short but you could expand it with ideas and it will be a great longer poem. Trust me, it will be a great poem. Keep ...