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If it's not alive, why do they have to kill it? I saw a sign that said that once, and it's the exact truth. Think about that. And Cpt. Smurf, ...

Well, this is going to be kind of hard to explain Galatea, but if God didn't make you, He wouldn't be giving you a choice. If he made only people ...

Back for more! “What did you call me for, at this late hour?” the first shadow whispered. Zekyll bit his lip [s]so that he would [/s] to remain quiet. Whatever ...

Ok, Jared, here I am to critique your piece like you asked! I haven't fully read what Mark said to change, but I'm going to tell you my opinions. First ...

But then again, those people that believe there is a Hell and trust Christ as their Savior really have nothing to lose, if you think about it. If it is ...

I have a problem. I got lost in the first paragraph... What is happening?

Congrats Kylan!!!!! I know the feeling, just finished mine a few weeks ago and it is a feeling unlike any other. Is Honor posted on here anywhere?

Mute, because you can still write what you want to say and communicate in a lot of ways. If you're blind, you can never see the people you love again. ...

Well, I really don't have time to be writing this, but I'm hoping to maybe help set the record straight and, in the long run, it's worth it, I guess. ...

Thanks Jared! I have a couple of questions, though. First, I'll list of some of the good things you had: - Cool characters Second, some bad things you had: - ...

Hey yoyo!! Slowly creeping over the earth, you are a steady traveler and a companion to any who rises with the morning star. I don't understand this part... Otherwise, good ...

Overall, I liked it pretty well. I mainly agree with the others. The captain was frantic, but with no luck in discovery, I didn't like this bit. Maybe change it ...

It was...interesting. Really, I liked it pretty good. I don't necessarily agree with all of it (especially the last two lines), but that's for another day. I thought it was ...

Hey, there! I see you're a new member! I just wanted to point something out to you. The rules ask that you review at least two pieces of somebody else's ...

I came into this thread expecting everybody to be all whiney and saying, "Don't hurt the poor dears." But I'm glad to see that most people are for spanking! I ...