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Hi and welcome to YWS! I’m a little confused as to whether this work is meant to have more words or if this was posted accidentally! I’d be happy as ...

Thank you very much for the review.

Sorry for the double reply, but that was a mess of a comment lol. Double sorry for that XD. In short, let me repeat what I meant. I had some ...

Hi Ty! Thank you so much for this review! I had some trouble in the second and third stanzas in trying to figure out how to end them. For the ...

You are very welcome and I am just glad I could help!

Thank you so much for the review! I have debated on how Denise should address other students, so I get that comment on her sounding younger. Oops, I did not ...

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for this review! I will definitely try to edit this to get rid of the reader addresses. I kind of forgot they were ...

Thank you so much Biscuits! This is really helpful!

Thank you so much for this Rosey! If I manage to get anywhere near a first draft, or just to edit, I will be referring back to this a lot!

Oh my gosh, I am so sorry. I didn't even realize my paragraphs were repeating that way! Does deleting them make this flow any better?

Hi Anika! Welcome to YWS! I would just like to ask for some clarification as to what parts of my first three paragraphs are repetitive. I wanted to emphasize that ...

[quote] then [quote] with a slash in front of the second quote.

For future reference, you can quote works by using Something from the text !

Ooh. That %u201Cfight%u201D line makes more sense now. You do not need to change that if that is your story, cause that is cool to have a certain style. You ...

Thanks so much!