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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: nanamam

    Thanks for your review! Well I'm currently taking six APs, and while I am slowly wilting under the incoming stresses of senior year, some definitely offer less homework than others. ...

    Sep 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: metes

    In this case, I liked putting everything lower case because it seemed to make the poem even more somber and such. I'm glad you liked it still though. And I ...

    Aug 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: metes

    Okay good lol XD. Thank you. Alright sweet. I'm glad it's more connected. And you were totally right. I wrote the trash stanza first and then went back to it ...

    Aug 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: metes

    Sorry for giving you more notifications but does the fourth stanza seem better or worse now?

    Aug 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: metes

    Aw you're so nice. I just don't see that myself, but I'm my worst critic, so maybe I will, thank you. I appreciate it. :)

    Aug 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: metes

    Hey Aley! Thanks so much for your review and I will edit this right now with your advice before I forget! And thank you for the suggestion, but I don't ...

    Aug 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Open, Close

    Thank you so much for the review and your kind words!

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Open, Close

    Thank you so much for your review! I apparently seem to only be able to write sad poems but oh well XD. I'll definitely put your advice to use!

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Open, Close

    Thank you so much for your review! I take way too long breaks between writing so I keep feeling like I'm starting at level one every time XD. Your advice ...

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Lol XD

    Jan 16, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Oh ok sorry. I'm way behind all the memes and everything haha, and I'm still a teen... oh well. Thanks for commenting either way ! XD

    Jan 16, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Um, thanks? XD.

    Jan 16, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm really glad that you were able to connect to my poem, but I'm sorry it made you this sad! Yeah it was ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Aw I'm glad it connected with you, but I'm sorry it makes you cry! Thank you though!

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: I Hate It When I Can't Let Go

    Oh it's slightly based off this one where the girl grew up on a farm in a small town, and she only came back when her father passed away. She ...

    Dec 21, 2016


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