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Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!

reference: 11. taraxacum officinale (a) my mother, who's typically bubbly-like-soda declared war ready to squat for hours against these cute dandy little lions that pop up daily in the somewhat ...

Thank you so much @alliyah! I'm glad you're enjoying my patch of flower poems XD reference: 10. bidens torta you're known as being simply sweet, in your hidden away place ...

I can tell you like rhyming and repetition ;; ) I think it works well in shorter chunks, as shown here, and I like the extended metaphors!

reference: 9. rosa arvensis you swooped in like a big bat with wings of white onto my blank loading page, led by an orange-yellow head like that crayola crayon that ...

I wanted to pop by and say that there's some wonderful imagery in these poems and that repetition worked very well in Mr. Poe's. There's such emotion in your acrostic ...

Hey there! All of these poems are really neat - I like the questions format of the first and fourth ones, but especially the latter, as I think you've got ...

Hey Blue! Wanted to stop by and say I really like both of these poems - the first has a lot of emotions packed in a few short lines, and ...

I can't say much more besides that I love your style and the imagery here and formatting, and this is just very well done and a thrill to read all ...

The color palettes are great and eye-catching and I love getting different forms of formatting here - lost in translation is fascinating, but I like the rest of the purple-ish ...

This next series of poems are all hard-hitting, from give me your hand and a penny, I think the short lines help to hammer in the "helpless/lonely" tone, while the ...

These are really neat poems! The format on 5 is eye-catching and awesome, but the haiku is interesting as well. Really nice start to NaPo! ^^

All of these poems are nicely written, and I think the third one does a really good job of getting into the speaker's head and seeing from one's innocent vision. ...

Wanted to pop by and say that these two poems are really interesting! Your style of narration with imagery works well, and the dashes/format in the second one is pretty ...

@JadeLotus Finally done! Hope that helped.