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Hey Blue! Wanted to stop by and say I really like both of these poems - the first has a lot of emotions packed in a few short lines, and ...

I can't say much more besides that I love your style and the imagery here and formatting, and this is just very well done and a thrill to read all ...

The color palettes are great and eye-catching and I love getting different forms of formatting here - lost in translation is fascinating, but I like the rest of the purple-ish ...

This next series of poems are all hard-hitting, from give me your hand and a penny, I think the short lines help to hammer in the "helpless/lonely" tone, while the ...

These are really neat poems! The format on 5 is eye-catching and awesome, but the haiku is interesting as well. Really nice start to NaPo! ^^

All of these poems are nicely written, and I think the third one does a really good job of getting into the speaker's head and seeing from one's innocent vision. ...

Wanted to pop by and say that these two poems are really interesting! Your style of narration with imagery works well, and the dashes/format in the second one is pretty ...

@JadeLotus Finally done! Hope that helped.

@ellasnotebook I'm scared of rhyming stuff, so I'm glad you liked that one! Thanks! :D Also, thanks @Tenyo! I'm trying to go between what the flowers actually are and a ...

Hey! Welcome back ^^ I hope you had fun on your trip. 3 & 4 are really nice here - I like the rhyming and the beat in especially the ...

Hey! Wanted to stop by and say this is a neat writing style, to go more so on longer, more narrative poems. You've got some nice, winding stanzas and neat ...

Slightly weird to be submitting first, but I figured I'd ping some peeps too to see if I can spark other submissions XD My entry: las flores bonitas maybe one ...

reference: 7. rosa minutifolia [I] you came up as one species, left as another, those older than you debating on what/who you are, what lies beneath your green stems. whether ...

reference: 6. rosa stellata [I] he's cute, this little bud of a thin branch trying to squeeze out of the dead ropes around him. a pale purple wanting to be ...

Hey LordStar. I wanted to say that these seem like very personal, very in-depth poems, and I think that there are some really well-done metaphors and interesting things happening here. ...