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Re: Writing Mute Characters
Hi! I've done some looking into this, and I'm trying to cross-reference stuff I remember reading about years ago to more recent resources. I think what it boils down to ...
Apr 19, 2019 -
Re: paroxysm
Wow, that was really interesting rhyming in poem 16! Overall, the way you weave through ideas and stanzas just takes my breath away! You're too good XD
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
Thanks @alliyah! I kept rewriting that poem trying to get a sort of tone - one that was a bit dark-ish? Or realistic in a way. I switched around which ...
Apr 18, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 16. vanilla pompona your swooping, thin & wide blooms, ready to spread, slightly fray at the ends as they grow and age. your dark, skinny seeds of utter sweetness ...
Apr 17, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 15. phalaenopsis orchid i wasn't sure whether to feel elated by a house-flower we could take care of, or nervous because you're an orchid, cursed to wither in my ...
Apr 16, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 14. cynara cardunculus var. scolymus you're among the rare bloom-able large plants in most gardens, with a wide, spherical-shaped base. your hearts are jarred away, taking up space in ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Is Said Dead?
I don't think that using "said" as a dialogue tag is dead. Plenty of authors really try to push having unique and different ways of referring to a character speaking, ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: why does the grass grow?
This is a cute, short little poem! I think what could work here would be to build on your connection to believing in myths and fantastical things, or even doing ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: What is school like?
This is an old topic, but I figured I could say some stuff about middle school. First, some schools are going to be indoor if in typically colder/warmer areas so ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: What are some good online writing tools?
Hi! I don't know if this answer comes too late, but I wanted to try and respond to this question. I'm assuming that all of your assignments are writing ones? ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: Jewish eating traditions? And general info
As a quick message to start your research, here are a few things to consider. Passover is a very important holiday that brings its own set of traditions to a ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: Recommend books to my introverted vampire girl?
Late answer, but this caught my eye right now. For someone who's a teenager and likes grittier books/themes/not-supernaturally-linked, I would say that she could probably scope out stuff like Alice ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: April Madness 2019
Poem Edited (sorry!) i wasn't sure whether to feel elated by a house-flower we could take care of, or nervous because you're an orchid, cursed to wither in my shaky ...
Apr 14, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 13. bellis perennis you're common, too worn, worn, worn, in the airy green fields, other flowers already born. botanists now say, bleed, bleed, bleed, or let you wither away ...
Apr 13, 2019 -
Re: these benedight flowers
Thanks @Cadi! A couple of these poems I've tried messing with tones and ended up with a few versions XD I love trying to create little images, and "tangerine -" ...
Apr 13, 2019
