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This is a cute, short little poem! I think what could work here would be to build on your connection to believing in myths and fantastical things, or even doing ...

This is an old topic, but I figured I could say some stuff about middle school. First, some schools are going to be indoor if in typically colder/warmer areas so ...

Hi! I don't know if this answer comes too late, but I wanted to try and respond to this question. I'm assuming that all of your assignments are writing ones? ...

As a quick message to start your research, here are a few things to consider. Passover is a very important holiday that brings its own set of traditions to a ...

Late answer, but this caught my eye right now. For someone who's a teenager and likes grittier books/themes/not-supernaturally-linked, I would say that she could probably scope out stuff like Alice ...

Poem Edited (sorry!) i wasn't sure whether to feel elated by a house-flower we could take care of, or nervous because you're an orchid, cursed to wither in my shaky ...

reference: 13. bellis perennis you're common, too worn, worn, worn, in the airy green fields, other flowers already born. botanists now say, bleed, bleed, bleed, or let you wither away ...

Thanks @Cadi! A couple of these poems I've tried messing with tones and ended up with a few versions XD I love trying to create little images, and "tangerine -" ...

Hey @zwilliams welcome to YWS! You filled this out just fine. I finished your review!

reference: 11. taraxacum officinale (a) my mother, who's typically bubbly-like-soda declared war ready to squat for hours against these cute dandy little lions that pop up daily in the somewhat ...

Thank you so much @alliyah! I'm glad you're enjoying my patch of flower poems XD reference: 10. bidens torta you're known as being simply sweet, in your hidden away place ...

I can tell you like rhyming and repetition ;; ) I think it works well in shorter chunks, as shown here, and I like the extended metaphors!

reference: 9. rosa arvensis you swooped in like a big bat with wings of white onto my blank loading page, led by an orange-yellow head like that crayola crayon that ...

I wanted to pop by and say that there's some wonderful imagery in these poems and that repetition worked very well in Mr. Poe's. There's such emotion in your acrostic ...

Hey there! All of these poems are really neat - I like the questions format of the first and fourth ones, but especially the latter, as I think you've got ...