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reference: 22. mammillaria beneckei round, sweet prickly shape, you've got a bud for one arm, then another small, identical head as a second limb. cute little leaves are stuck within ...

Alright, good luck to everyone, and here I go again XD do you remember that night, when you handed me carnations bright like the sun? i dubbed thee orange, as ...

reference: 21. echinopsis spachiana cacti are fascinating plants, of how they persevere against curious birds pecking holes in their thorny structures, harsh to the touch, but welcoming to a rare ...

Congrats @4revgreen ! You've done a great job reviewing!!

reference: 20. tillandsia usneoides it fascinated me to think of how incorrectly plants can be named, as i squat by spanish moss, but it's not moss, in the end, as ...

Just checking in NaPo Buddy! Hope you're doing alright ^^ you've kept nicely with the rhymes and neat little snippets of imagery woven with more narration-style lines. Good job!

reference: 19. billbergia pyramidalis it's strange that you've got such a fruity, sugary color but you're not really blooming, you're a kind of parasite, or symbiote growing from another plant ...

reference: 18. ascocentrum christensonianum they're sparkled cotton candy, their petals spread apart like they're a mini sweetened dragonfly they're too cute to not poke on their tiny red-blush middle

Hi! I've done some looking into this, and I'm trying to cross-reference stuff I remember reading about years ago to more recent resources. I think what it boils down to ...

Wow, that was really interesting rhyming in poem 16! Overall, the way you weave through ideas and stanzas just takes my breath away! You're too good XD

Thanks @alliyah! I kept rewriting that poem trying to get a sort of tone - one that was a bit dark-ish? Or realistic in a way. I switched around which ...

reference: 16. vanilla pompona your swooping, thin & wide blooms, ready to spread, slightly fray at the ends as they grow and age. your dark, skinny seeds of utter sweetness ...

reference: 15. phalaenopsis orchid i wasn't sure whether to feel elated by a house-flower we could take care of, or nervous because you're an orchid, cursed to wither in my ...

reference: 14. cynara cardunculus var. scolymus you're among the rare bloom-able large plants in most gardens, with a wide, spherical-shaped base. your hearts are jarred away, taking up space in ...

I don't think that using "said" as a dialogue tag is dead. Plenty of authors really try to push having unique and different ways of referring to a character speaking, ...