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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {12/30} 4.05.18 love cracking there’s something enchanting of a floor that won’t stop breaking even worse than a still beating heart going through loves as the minutes tick by they ...

    Fri Apr 06, 2018 2:44 am
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {11/30} 4.05.18 dandruff cereal the curtain drops with a wave of her hands, graced very little by sunlight her blinds flutter with her breath, a quickened pace, rhythm building and ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 7:25 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {10/30} 4.05.18 travelers stop here for those who crept along the pathways, spinning curtsies and poses in the moonlight, the world encompasses you, deep in her grasp, and never lets ...

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 4:24 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: insipid kisses and other midnight musings

    This last one hurts

    Thu Apr 05, 2018 6:13 am
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {9/30} 4.04.18 dried joy forces sparred in my mind flashes of forward fists illuminate the ricochets of sharpened spears, muttered words wrecking the once lively landscape strips of happiness scattere

    Wed Apr 04, 2018 10:19 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    @alliyah @Lareine @ellasnotebook Thank you all so much for your comments! I loved your feedback so much. Warning though: this one makes no sense. {8/30} 4.04.18 reflecting ideas i gaze ...

    Wed Apr 04, 2018 5:53 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: NaPo 2018 Neapolitan Stats & Cloud Center

    colorful notes contains “storm” at least, and darn, I knew I should’ve put in “water” and not just alluded to it XD. Next time, I’ll switch “waterfall” lol.

    Wed Apr 04, 2018 1:38 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: streetlight devils

    Wow. You’re so talented and totally winning our April Madness bracket. Trickster has some really nice vocabulary to better create the idea of a frantic, rushed attempt to write? I ...

    Wed Apr 04, 2018 3:49 am
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: desert rain

    you are my brain mutation I cannot escape from you the desert is a subtle damnation This is a gem. I would have quoted the entire poem here, but your ...

    Wed Apr 04, 2018 2:46 am
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: heavy dreams & lofty responsibilities

    I don’t know which poem I love more! Your poems have such good flow, even when there’s not really specific stanzas. You don’t need them anyways! #1 reminded me of ...

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 11:03 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {7/30} 4.03.18 colorful notes does music encompass your soul, your vision before you? can you see the world accompanied by sounds and notes? the yellow stars twinkling back from the ...

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 6:56 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {6/30} 4.03.18 traditions and memories do you want to go back to those nights, filled with fantasies coming alive in black-and-white photographs, films, illuminating those classical traditions whirlin

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 5:53 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles

    {5/30} 4.03.18 countdown to falling apart cutting a string down pale, scarred ribbon pieces drift on that spiral of pain thoughts floating around, iridescent swirls covering up negligent memories, moc

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 4:24 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: April Madness 2018

    @Lumi, you’ve got a better chance than me XD. I’m reading all the poems and it’s not looking good haha... I’ll just be in the corner. Seriously though, all of ...

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 4:11 pm
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i would for you always—

    So i. 24 blew me away, by your vocabulary, and I love how you applied the 24 pages to a time period. I didn’t even think of that until you ...

    Tue Apr 03, 2018 1:26 am


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