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A couple parts of this rhymes, but it's not a full rhyme scheme, and uh the last two lines of this rhyme. Not sure if those meet the requirements though ...

{16/30} 4.06.18 down slide there’s the sensation that i’m falling my toes graze the ground leaving streaks the size of rain droplets in my wake i tap as my world ...

I like the second more I think XD. But both look neat.

{15/30} 4.06.18 not speaking i can’t speak, can’t breathe the words die under my tongue air is dragged away by the cold winter storm outside feel the rush of desperation ...

I’m loving these poems so far. Your rhyming was really good in the sonnet. The second one was pretty cool too, but I don’t know what structure you were going ...

{14/30} 4.05.18 back in time yesterday brought lovely memories of how simple life used to be we never paid attention just selfish creatures as stuck in our young ways as ...

{13/30} 4.05.18 breaking out emotion concrete covered in cracks ruins our garage's floor fueling the anger within us ground level

{12/30} 4.05.18 love cracking there’s something enchanting of a floor that won’t stop breaking even worse than a still beating heart going through loves as the minutes tick by they ...

{11/30} 4.05.18 dandruff cereal the curtain drops with a wave of her hands, graced very little by sunlight her blinds flutter with her breath, a quickened pace, rhythm building and ...

{10/30} 4.05.18 travelers stop here for those who crept along the pathways, spinning curtsies and poses in the moonlight, the world encompasses you, deep in her grasp, and never lets ...

This last one hurts

{9/30} 4.04.18 dried joy forces sparred in my mind flashes of forward fists illuminate the ricochets of sharpened spears, muttered words wrecking the once lively landscape strips of happiness scattere

@alliyah @Lareine @ellasnotebook Thank you all so much for your comments! I loved your feedback so much. Warning though: this one makes no sense. {8/30} 4.04.18 reflecting ideas i gaze ...

colorful notes contains “storm” at least, and darn, I knew I should’ve put in “water” and not just alluded to it XD. Next time, I’ll switch “waterfall” lol.

Wow. You’re so talented and totally winning our April Madness bracket. Trickster has some really nice vocabulary to better create the idea of a frantic, rushed attempt to write? I ...