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Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{22/30} 4.09.18 childish times “take care,” comes the whisper from my phone, final words in a conversation i hated. it couldn’t be over, no, no, it feels like we’re still ...
Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:46 pm -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{21/30} 4.09.18 reminiscing my education i can’t picture death, receding breath, oxygen levels decimated choke on carbon-filled air {i guess I learned something after all} my education was part laug
Mon Apr 09, 2018 7:35 pm -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
@bluewaterlily Thank you so much! Congrats on writing 16 yourself ;). You are so seeet! I’ve seriously been writing about random objects in ether my house or things I see ...
Mon Apr 09, 2018 5:32 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{20/30} 4.08.18 a full glass there’s a glass full of possibilities they come pouring out one after the other {can i be happy?} skip across the page, lightness in every ...
Mon Apr 09, 2018 4:51 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{19/30} 4.08.18 past emotions sentimental novels are so much richer than modern ones, that feminine gaze across centuries of written texts spewing on and on about gender roles {she's muted ...
Mon Apr 09, 2018 2:09 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{18/30} 4.07.18 a tree living an unknown legend details a tree wanting for more, branches spread out desperate for a burst of something else beyond her reach, ever-lasting desire as ...
Sun Apr 08, 2018 1:45 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{17/30} 4.07.18 slices slice life into sections, each a rarity happy light leaking into its moodier neighbor, yellows versus purples, a pretty picture, and combination to the eye. {emotions have ...
Sun Apr 08, 2018 12:40 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
@alliyah Thank you so much! I’ve been trying to do different things and seeing some of the poetry jams have at least helped give different structures to check out. You’re ...
Sat Apr 07, 2018 2:57 am -
Re: NaPo 2018 Neapolitan Stats & Cloud Center
A couple parts of this rhymes, but it's not a full rhyme scheme, and uh the last two lines of this rhyme. Not sure if those meet the requirements though ...
Sat Apr 07, 2018 1:50 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{16/30} 4.06.18 down slide there’s the sensation that i’m falling my toes graze the ground leaving streaks the size of rain droplets in my wake i tap as my world ...
Fri Apr 06, 2018 7:39 pm -
Re: insipid kisses and other midnight musings
I like the second more I think XD. But both look neat.
Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:13 pm -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{15/30} 4.06.18 not speaking i can’t speak, can’t breathe the words die under my tongue air is dragged away by the cold winter storm outside feel the rush of desperation ...
Fri Apr 06, 2018 6:10 pm -
Re: I'm Doing NaPo this Year Despite Being So Busy or So Help Me
I’m loving these poems so far. Your rhyming was really good in the sonnet. The second one was pretty cool too, but I don’t know what structure you were going ...
Fri Apr 06, 2018 2:57 pm -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{14/30} 4.05.18 back in time yesterday brought lovely memories of how simple life used to be we never paid attention just selfish creatures as stuck in our young ways as ...
Fri Apr 06, 2018 2:48 am -
Re: my hopes are as strong as bubbles
{13/30} 4.05.18 breaking out emotion concrete covered in cracks ruins our garage's floor fueling the anger within us ground level
Fri Apr 06, 2018 2:44 am
