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Thank you so much @bluewaterlily! I was certainly excited to be doing some official** flower poetry now, so here's to hoping I can keep it up XD @alliyah Thanks a ...

This is really interesting! There's some really rich vocabulary here and some neat formatting. Very promising start!

Wow! I really like the play on an acrostic form here, especially having the actual term in the poem. Nice start to NaPo ^^ (sad message, but very good indeed)

This seems like a spin-off "definition poetry" and I like this format. It's a sad but truthful message that comes across very clearly. Nice start to NaPo!

reference: 1. lilium amabile (a) at first glance, she looks like she is simply stretching up towards the light that gives her life. try as she might blend in with ...

I like that your NaPo title is already being put into play here ^^ The sort-of inner rhyme of "green/sheen" is cool to balance out "sky/why" and I like the ...

I would love to participate as a contestant as well XD

Congratulations @JadeLotus on FM!

should a new year bring forth a wave of tears every day, the time that sears in one's mind yet they hold dear just the same, to fight the fear ...

My NaPo goals are to write at least one poem per flower that a certain Birdie gave me so sweetly. That equals to be 18, in total, but it would ...

plead for water now, from a fresh, far-away spring, or the kitchen sink.

@manilla Finally done! I spent probably too long on that review, whoops, but I did like the poem overall. Hope that was helpful.

Count me in as well! It was a lot of fun putting comments on others’ threads, so why not do it in the official sense as well c:

Reaching up to scratch at his neck, Jeff tried to focus on Akane, even with the demon's pitch-black wings that make him nervous. His tale was a sad, yet relatable ...

Colleen glanced at all of her fellow demons, trying not to stare at any, especially the noble-looking one, as she figured direct contact with him would probably give poor Jeff ...