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Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 5. lilium tsingtauense [I] this is orange as the sunrise, or sunset, whatever you'd prefer, (this is your story after all) grace your lips like it's a tangerine flavor, ...
Sat Apr 06, 2019 12:19 am -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 4. lilium 'stargazer' pink fades to white in a sudden, brush-stroke, bits of space lie between the edges of petals. a bountiful of dots, darker, almost red-purple color, furl ...
Thu Apr 04, 2019 5:32 pm -
Re: A Dragon of Carefully-Chosen Words
Hi Cadi! ^^ All three of these poems are pretty cool, the first being short with the rhymes adding a nice element, the second is pretty cute, while the third ...
Thu Apr 04, 2019 12:08 am -
Re: these benedight flowers
Thanks @ellasnotebook! I really wasn't sure how to finish that poem, and I kept thinking about amable/amabile, so I'm really glad you liked that part! :D reference: 3. lilium regale ...
Wed Apr 03, 2019 10:02 pm -
Re: 2019 Contest Thread
fraey's contest thread May or may not end with 30 or 15 poems, so I guess I'll see which badge I'll try for. Garden Challenge 1. Comment on ellasnotebook (1) ...
Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:02 pm -
Re: it's okay
These are three really nice entries sound! The rhythm of parting song flows well, enjoying you is a short, sweet little snippet, and I really like the repetition in silent ...
Wed Apr 03, 2019 4:08 pm -
Re: fairy tale denouement
Hey Rain! These are both really nice poems here - I like the play on words and these precise, specific images of the stereotypical "sweet/perfect" princess type, or the tea ...
Wed Apr 03, 2019 5:41 am -
Re: why does the grass grow?
The repetition is really interesting! There’s a nice beat with the subtle rhyming of the last lines, and I like this idea of making the world your own. ^^ This ...
Wed Apr 03, 2019 1:34 am -
Re: these benedight flowers
Thank you so much @bluewaterlily! I was certainly excited to be doing some official** flower poetry now, so here's to hoping I can keep it up XD @alliyah Thanks a ...
Tue Apr 02, 2019 9:56 pm -
Re: love and complementary colors
This is really interesting! There's some really rich vocabulary here and some neat formatting. Very promising start!
Tue Apr 02, 2019 3:45 am -
Re: paroxysm
Wow! I really like the play on an acrostic form here, especially having the actual term in the poem. Nice start to NaPo ^^ (sad message, but very good indeed)
Tue Apr 02, 2019 2:28 am -
Re: to bend shadows into light
This seems like a spin-off "definition poetry" and I like this format. It's a sad but truthful message that comes across very clearly. Nice start to NaPo!
Tue Apr 02, 2019 2:25 am -
Re: these benedight flowers
reference: 1. lilium amabile (a) at first glance, she looks like she is simply stretching up towards the light that gives her life. try as she might blend in with ...
Mon Apr 01, 2019 9:57 pm -
Re: why does the grass grow?
I like that your NaPo title is already being put into play here ^^ The sort-of inner rhyme of "green/sheen" is cool to balance out "sky/why" and I like the ...
Mon Apr 01, 2019 7:24 pm -
Re: April Madness 2019
I would love to participate as a contestant as well XD
Mon Apr 01, 2019 5:57 pm
