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@ellasnotebook I'm scared of rhyming stuff, so I'm glad you liked that one! Thanks! :D Also, thanks @Tenyo! I'm trying to go between what the flowers actually are and a ...

Hey! Welcome back ^^ I hope you had fun on your trip. 3 & 4 are really nice here - I like the rhyming and the beat in especially the ...

Hey! Wanted to stop by and say this is a neat writing style, to go more so on longer, more narrative poems. You've got some nice, winding stanzas and neat ...

Slightly weird to be submitting first, but I figured I'd ping some peeps too to see if I can spark other submissions XD My entry: las flores bonitas maybe one ...

reference: 7. rosa minutifolia [I] you came up as one species, left as another, those older than you debating on what/who you are, what lies beneath your green stems. whether ...

reference: 6. rosa stellata [I] he's cute, this little bud of a thin branch trying to squeeze out of the dead ropes around him. a pale purple wanting to be ...

Hey LordStar. I wanted to say that these seem like very personal, very in-depth poems, and I think that there are some really well-done metaphors and interesting things happening here. ...

reference: 5. lilium tsingtauense [I] this is orange as the sunrise, or sunset, whatever you'd prefer, (this is your story after all) grace your lips like it's a tangerine flavor, ...

reference: 4. lilium 'stargazer' pink fades to white in a sudden, brush-stroke, bits of space lie between the edges of petals. a bountiful of dots, darker, almost red-purple color, furl ...

Hi Cadi! ^^ All three of these poems are pretty cool, the first being short with the rhymes adding a nice element, the second is pretty cute, while the third ...

Thanks @ellasnotebook! I really wasn't sure how to finish that poem, and I kept thinking about amable/amabile, so I'm really glad you liked that part! :D reference: 3. lilium regale ...

fraey's contest thread May or may not end with 30 or 15 poems, so I guess I'll see which badge I'll try for. Garden Challenge 1. Comment on ellasnotebook (1) ...

These are three really nice entries sound! The rhythm of parting song flows well, enjoying you is a short, sweet little snippet, and I really like the repetition in silent ...

Hey Rain! These are both really nice poems here - I like the play on words and these precise, specific images of the stereotypical "sweet/perfect" princess type, or the tea ...

The repetition is really interesting! There’s a nice beat with the subtle rhyming of the last lines, and I like this idea of making the world your own. ^^ This ...