keirab

8/10...very philosophical...

8.5/10 It's really pretty like a painting

Hi HunterH! My name's Keira and I'm pretty new here myself... What do you like to read and write? How about music? PM me if you need a crit or ...

This is good. I actually liked it a lot. I thought some parts were a bit cliche, with her dad beating her and such, and the boy ending up being ...

I liked this poem but I'm sorry to say I didn't really understand it...I guess I'm just not "deep enough"... :D I think if you added another stanza or two ...

Oh wow, this was hysterical. I laughed out loud multiple times. That just made my day. :D Especially loved the part about Snow White going back to the dwarves and ...

Wow, Louisa! Bravo! *applauds* I really enjoyed this chapter! The descriptions of the circus were extremely creepy, you really made Pierre out to be a hateful character, which is difficult ...

Wow! There really isn't any advice I can give you. I really loved this poem. It was very simple but yet effective. Nice job! :D

All in all, this was a very interesting idea for a story, but quite confusing in some places. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but I won't name ...

Hi, I'm Keira, love your avvie and your username! PM me if you need a crit or want to talk...

Hi Soleil! Ooh! I love France too! *claps* Well, technically I've never been there, but I would LOVE to go... Photography is so much fun! I can't wait to see ...

Hi Rapt! My name's Keira! :D What genres do you like to read/write? What about music? PM me if you need a crit or just want to chat! ~Keira~

Hi Lucie! :smt039 My name is Keira and i'm pretty new here myself. If you like to read and write i'm guessing you'll like it here. :wink: What other hobbies ...

Hi from one sci-fi lover and band geek to another! I'm Keira I'm pretty new here too...I can't wait to read some of the stuff you've written! PM me when ...

Basically a good story, had a couple issues with it that were already mentioned. Way out-there idea but in sci-fi that's a good thing! :wink: Yeah, to answer your question, ...