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Re: Breathing
Aww! That is really sweet! Um...excuse me for a moment...I have something in my eye.... :wink: I really liked this a lot! My only problem was that it seemed to ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: yo ho ho and a bottle of ink
Hi, I'm Keira, nice to meet you! :D Hannah Montana, eh?...I like her songs, but not too terribly fond of the show... I definitely dance in my room to "Nobody's ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Heya guys =]
Well hi there! My name's Keira and I'm fairly new here too. So I can't really say I'll be happy to answer any questions you have...but you can PM me ...
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Abuse
Hi Lakegirls! Okay. I liked your speech as an essay, but it didn't seem to flow very well as a speech. I'm sure you'll take care of that later, though, ...
Feb 19, 2008 -
Re: Rejection letters...
Yuppers. Nothing like a good rejection letter to make you pull your hair out and scream in frustration.
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
8/10 So very retro. :)
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Kevyn--That is an awesome artistic photo! Chevy--Wow, you are gorgeous!!!! Muse--I'm so jealous!!! Those pics are beautiful!!!!! This is definitely the best-looking writers community on the internet!
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Greetings!
Hi Kevyn! I'm Keira...I'm fairly new here myself so I can't say I'll answer any questions you have...but welcome to the site anyway! :D I can't wait to read one ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Part 1 of Ch.1 "Boy behind the counter"
I thought this was a good beginning but there wasn't much of a steady flow to it. It seemed that all the sentences were about the same length, and they ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: The Sweet Smell Of Success
I really liked this story a lot. And I mean a lot! It was very well written, had excellent voice, and, although the main character was cynical and pessimistic, it ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Hi everyone! I'm new
Welcome to YWS! Wow. O.O You have only been here about 10 days and I have seen you everywhere... Congrats on being active so soon! Enthusiasm is great! I hope ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: Magical Realism Essay.. correct grammar & such?
*Applauds* Wow Jenna, that was very well-written! I knew absolutely nothing about the subject before, and you explained it quite clearly. Props on that! Most of the grammatical mistakes I ...
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: Like Fine Grains of Sand
Aww! That was sweet! I liked it a lot. Especially the repetition of it. I liked the second stanza especially. Happy writing! ~Keira
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: Ethan's Take 1/9
Ooh! Yay! Yay! More Valentine's Day Sucks! I jumped for joy when I saw this topic posted... Don't really have any critique for it, it's good. Can't wait to read ...
Feb 10, 2008 -
Re: Glasses Down Low (the nerd song)
Hahahahaha thats amazing! Love his ghetto moves hehe.
Feb 9, 2008
