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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 30
I WAS RIGHT: maybe When I smiled: First of all, epic battling, I loved how Corelia is an equal match for Leiytning. Their fight and taunting perfectly demonstrates their hate ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 29
I love how the siblings can bicker wholeheartedly, it just shows how much they love each other. When I smiled: As I said, the siblings arguing added a wholesome aspect ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 28
And here it is. The place where the sun shatters. When I smiled: Seyber's care for Kita is plain to see and is touching. I also like how she directly ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 27
Dark, I like it. When I smiled: Seyber's honesty on what happened, and acknowledging that Corelia was somewhat admirable is interesting. I also like how they show some ignorance on ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 26
This is such a good chapter, it perfectly reflects the nature of war, and now I'mma introduce a new template. When I smiled (Innovative or just outright well done moments) ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 25
First Impressions: Woah, a mutant. Those sound eerie. The fact that they've begun swarming makes me think that something will happen that cause a Zyrean-Aubade alliance. Also, Kita acknowledging that ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 23
NICE!!! I love that First impressions: Correlia and Leiytning have warped views of the other, that much is plain to see. Both think the other was a horrid villain. I ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 22
No Format because I'm going to be going full Book Theory Mode Kita is most definitely a half demon. As I said before, the Conscience could be her demonic nature, ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 21
First impressions: The contrasting view is incredible. The demons see Corelia as the ultimate evil, and Corelia sees them that way. It's a war between two greys. This allows it ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 20
First Impressions: This chapter does very well in explaining how the Zyreans are unique from other demons. They value life and love helping and defending each other. The other demons ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 19
First impressions: Nice, Seyber is such a nice person. She is harsh but kind and understanding, I like how she makes an attempt to befriend Kita. This chapter definitely gave ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 18
First impressions: Mao and Yuna are in for a big shock. They are gonna have a heart attack. I also snorted when Yuna suddenly said, "Mao, all I feel is ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race: The Hidden Truth - Chapter 17
First impressions Corelia is strong. Her determination to protect her people is evident, as well as her worry that Kita did a stupid thing. I like how the chapter cemented ...
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Re: This Colorless World
To take a stand. That is what this story is about. First impressions: Elizabeth is an inspirational character. She took a stand and stood her ground against evil. The Story ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 16
I love how wholesome the demons act with each other, it shows that they care for each other deeply. Then add in Kita and really only Zin, Seyber, and Scorch ...
Feb 26, 2024
