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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 48
Gosh Dang it, why does this have to end on a cliff hanger? When I smiled: I put it off long enough, so let's begin. I like the controlled panic ...
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Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 47
When I smiled: Well, Dang that was a brutal fight. I was not expecting Leiytning to lose a hand and Corelia to be not really that much worse for wear. ...
Jun 6, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 46
NOOO When I Smiled: I knew it would be Corelia the moment she started talking about it, but why did Thundur think she'd win, Corelia was hopped up with so ...
Jun 5, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 45
I can't believe we're so close to the end. When I smiled: As I thought, Corelia is still good. She just has a massive misunderstanding and misguidance about the Zyreans ...
Jun 3, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 44
When I smiled: Well, I can safely say that was both unexpected and expected at the same time. I knew Kita would kill someone but I was not expecting it ...
May 29, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 43
When I smiled: That was a cool discussion about the ocul. Echo seems like a generally interesting creature.I am really interested to learn more about it. I also like that ...
May 24, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 42
When I smiled: OK, to start out. I like how Thundur was just so tcked off that Kita was still needed. Her stubborn refusal to accept Kita's apology and other ...
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Re: The Inconvienences
Anna has everything happening to her at the same time. When I smiled: I love the fact that Anna is just so casual with all of these fictional characters and ...
May 20, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 41
When I smiled: That was epic. Leiytning managed to get in there, managed to Save Seyber and Zin, then they all got out of there alive, without many injuries. That ...
May 15, 2024 -
Re: Bone Boy: Part One
Dang, what a bitter sweet ending. When I smiled: This was an emotional rollercoaster. Given what you normally write, I half expected for Theodore to actually be a bad guy. ...
May 13, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 40
This was a fun one. When I smiled: I love just how confused Leiytning was throughout this entire thing. His pretty much "wow, that's it?" upon hearing what was happening ...
May 8, 2024 -
Re: Worse Than Fire | Part 1
Minorly concerned about the based on a true story part, but let's go. Where I smiled: The writing style is immaculate, it showcases an almost dreamy terrain, giving a sense ...
May 6, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 39
Gosh Dang it Corelia. When I smiled: Corelia, what the heck? You promise not to hurt them. She really went off the deep end here and she's really just torturing ...
Apr 29, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 38
When I smiled: I somewhat feel like this was a bit jump for Corelia, while I kind of guessed this would happen, it still was a shock. She's a pro ...
Apr 29, 2024 -
Re: The Forsaken Race - The Hidden Truth: Chapter 37
Please note this was written with voice to text. If I have any errors please tell me. When I smiled: I knew that was coming. She loves the demons and ...
Apr 24, 2024
