keeperofgaming

I love this thanks

Quite well said. That is actually how I incorporated what I did of Greek mythology into the Prime Control.

In the ancient ground. I hear a big scary sound. So I fall and cry.

The ability to bass boost your voice irl

This is something I just wrote, but it definitely fits the bill. “It’s better to hold the light to the point it hurts than to fall into the darkness.” Actually, ...

Some cliches are fine but just try not to overdo it like. Don't make the main character just attractive to everyone and things like that. Like try to include flaws, ...

In the endless realm I sing the endless song now I hear the endless

I'm making some dark poetry, I normally do light stuff, but I'mma try to do dark things. Please let me know how to improve so I can make better by ...

Please review my story, The Adventures of Rose Hood. I need critique as it is the only story I have released.