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Re: Silver Tears Chapter One
I like the plot a lot. And you broke it into paragraphs, which some people forget to do. In the beginning I think you could add some more detail to ...
Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:55 am
I like the plot a lot. And you broke it into paragraphs, which some people forget to do. In the beginning I think you could add some more detail to ...
Fri Aug 26, 2011 2:55 am