kaylamarie004

Hey everyone, I'm so excited to hear everone's opinion on my work and happy to review yours too. I'm a really young writer like alot of people in here are. ...

I love the reason and the vocabulary you used carefully to identify feelings and emotions. I kind of lost track at where the setting was going, but the topic was ...

This was good. I was curious about what would happen at the end though. Aside from a few grammar mistakes like "then" was supposed to be "than" in that term ...

This is really good. So far, nothing to be fixed. I love how you expressed your feelings toward your child.

- At 8 years old she'd scream Mom, I love you - At 12 years old she'd say Mom I don't know what to do, please help me - At ...