kaylamarie004

Drinking calories all day and all night My favorite part was dancing with you under the moonlight We left in your car and kissed under the stars One wrong turn ...

I have to be honest and say this poem needs improvement. For starters, the poem would look a whole lot better if it was in a proper poem format. There's ...

This is awesome. I wanted to sing it out as I read it. Not only did it make sense and I can relate to it, but it also rhymes which ...

I can't thank you enough. You encouraged me to write another. I just couldn't put your advice to waste.

I watch you with her everyday I know you ignore all my signals My mind knows what my heart denies To watch you easily forget all about me Because of ...

I really like this poem because it has potential and I can relate to it. What I also like most about it, is that it stands the test of time. ...

I watch you with her everyday I watch you start to fall in love with her I watch you ignore all my signals I watch you forget all about me ...

This is a good poem and I love the purpose you put to it. What I didn't like was that it wasn't a rhyming poem, yet you still didn't complete ...

I don't know about other people, but I for one didn't really enjoy this poem. I think it was poorly writtent in various ways. It could have been better with ...

I absolutely admire this poem. It's lovely and challenging to the reader. I couldn't find any error that needed to be corrected from where I stand. I could already picture ...

This is such a beautiful poem. I don't think it needs any major corrections. I just think you should work on keeping the reader interested in the poem and wanting ...

I like the rhyming words you used so that the words would flow flawlessly among the topic. What I didn't like was that you will go on and on about ...

I love this story. You actually interested me to reading the whole thing. The way you described how the man felt about his new wife was amazing and, your choice ...

I have to say I wasn't really interested in this poem. I think it should have been written differently in a way that one word is not by itself because ...

I have to say that I didn't get anything this poem was trying to say. I understand poems could be written in anyway the writer wants it to be, but ...