kayay123

I had created my dreamworld one night while laying in bed. I closed my eye and I pictured a lake, a crystal clear lake. Surrounding the lake were oak trees ...

Hey I really love this, but I am confused. I know she is dating Zack but could you make that more apparent please? I was confused until I re-read it ...

This is such a great story! You have good detail and the characters are beautifully portrayed! Each time I read this, it gives me more inspiration to write

Hopefully this is a bit better but please critique it as best as you can I watched her through golden eyes as she came into my forest. I was perched ...

I loved it! This was an amazing piece! So well written and portrayed. I could feel the pain and suffering. I could feel all the characters feelings and you did ...

This was indeed very interesting. It captured my attention immediately when I saw the Fire and Ice bit. Always am I intrigued when opposites come together and I am interested ...

This captured my attention immediately. I really loved the beginning but the end is what really effected me. It showed me how the girl felt, maybe bitter and angry. I ...

Okay i am not so good at the grammer part so i will leave that to someone else. However I did notice the bit between Levi and Lia. It makes ...

Okay the detail is amazing and you made it very clear what was happening and what was going on in the story. I really enjoy reading about the characters and ...

Kinda new to this, but please I want your opinion! She was in intense pain. She doubled over as it spread through her body. Her heart felt as if it ...

I really loved reading this! this is a great thing to write about. That poor girl regretted something she did along with losing something else! I am so sorry for ...

This piece is so amazing! I did find it a bit hard to understand in the beginning but that may be because I am a fast reader. The writing was ...

The plot line was extrememly interesting and very good. It was interesting enough to keep me wanting to read more. I enjoyed all the details that you put in to ...

I'm new at the whole poetry thing, but I hope you like it Love Lost You shove me away, my back against a wall I have no one to turn ...

I have to say this is one of the coolest things I have ever read. The story is interesting enough to make you want to keep reading. The details are ...