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Re: My first Sonnet - A painted beauty
Wow beautiful. It paints a beautifuk Image. and I am not good with poems.
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: Broken Wings, Blooded Swords
I'm not going to do a line by line edit as the others have done because they've covered everthing you need to know. But 'm just going to give you ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Broken Wings, Blooded Swords
Thank you, Both of you. I can see what you mean. I'm so glad my friend talked me into uploading my story on here. I never would've noticed some of ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Ellima and the Cerulean Crystal # Chapter Two Part Two
i love it!! Whens the next part out? :D
Aug 4, 2008
