kawaii_kitti

banned for being Kira

I'm not going to do a line by line edit as the others have done because they've covered everthing you need to know. But 'm just going to give you ...

Thank you, Both of you. I can see what you mean. I'm so glad my friend talked me into uploading my story on here. I never would've noticed some of ...

This is a complete rewrite of chapter one, somethings added and a lot taken out. I have trouble with grammar and tense so please point out anything you see. Thank ...

i love it!! Whens the next part out? :D