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Re: Trapped In The Future Prologue
Overall I quite like the pace/snappiness here, but part of me thinks a few more little details would help. Your first paragraph is great - the sense of this being ...
May 5, 2015
Overall I quite like the pace/snappiness here, but part of me thinks a few more little details would help. Your first paragraph is great - the sense of this being ...
May 5, 2015
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