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Thanks! I do need to check the grammar and I will add some more to it. I didn't think about starting it back in Kentucky. Thanks again!

I made sure all the letters in the story were indented and I'm going to italicize them as well. It's easier for me if they're italic too so for future ...

Thanks! This helps! WHen I write, I forget to look at the tenses and keep them all present. I will work on that today. Thanks I'm glad you like it!

Some errors I saw: I stare out my window, the dark sky the dirty old houses Either I stare out my window at the dark sky and the dirty houses ...

Wow! Great writing! I'm inspired! It's a great piece and I hope to read more funny writings as well! Everyone else has pretty much said how to improve it so ...

Congrats on joining us! Hope to see some writing work soon! Welcome!

You can't help but keep reading this! Very catchy opening! It's not every day death is strolling by your mailbox and making conversations. lol. Definately nice to have death with ...

Amanda/Grodon Little did Amanda know where the road would lead? She stopped at a fork in the road. It was a dirt road, some gravel, and surrounded by corn fields. ...

This is a nice poem. Keep up the good work. It's very descriptive and has a nice flow. I think it's kind of sad, because it deals with death and ...

This is a nice song! I only wish I could listen to it on the radio too! LOL

I love how you described the spiders. I hate them, I have arachnaphobia, even though when I was a kid I played with the Grandaddy Long legs. I pulled a ...

This is written from one characters' point of view based on the novella I wrote Stealing Grace. Grace by Jared She is so beautiful, I can’t stand to stray. I ...

This is AWESOME! Great way for some students to remember the elements if they need to. Students in high school or college. Too bad they can't all rhyme but still ...

As theotherone and bugbug have already corrected and commented, I have to agree. There was some grammar. Once the bad grammar kept popping up to me, I had to stop ...

PART 3: AS I DID WITH PART 1 AND PART 2, I AM EDITING TODAY TO WHAT I HAVE IT IN MY WORD DOCUMENT. WHEN I POST IT DOESN'T KEEP ...