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That's cool, thanks. I will work on adding some of that information in. I'm thinking maybe Jared will be described in a note from Grace to Secret Admirer and she ...

I was trying to delete the thread, but no delete button have I read!

Nice poem. THe rhyming fits and you did a great job. I posted a new poem today, it's fan fic based on Final Fantasy 7 video game. :) Hope you ...

I wrote this poem from the perspective of Tifa. It's supposed to take place after Final Fantasy 7 and the movie that took place 2 years after the events in ...

This is a beautiful piece. You did a great job capturing the imagery and it is a very touching work.

I had both parents growing up, but I can try to imagine what it would be like with only one. I've lost close family members before (both in laws) and ...

Just beautiful! Keep up the awesome work! I'm going to follow you! Mwahaha. I like the imagery and the flow. I think everyone has already touched on the problems they ...

Hello! I'm in a poetry reviewing mood today! I loved this poem! I love warm climates and nice breezes. I don't really have anything else to add to those who ...

Try some different words. The rhyming does seem forced and you focused more on making words rhyme than making a poem. It's a nice poem, don't get me wrong, needs ...

I don't know you either but welcome back! I'm fairly new here. Can't wait for you to tear my stories apart and critique! I will return the favor of course!

Just absolutely, positively, beautiful! Some of the best nature pictures I've seen on the internet. Keep up the great work! You must be using a fantastic camera and know how ...

I really liked this story and wish it were longer. When I have letters or notes in my stories I indent them. I think that's what is supposed to be ...

Thanks for the review! I have changed the novel some and indentent the notes and italicized them so I can see them easier. Thanks for the review I will look ...

Um...wow. Violent but I like the descriptions and visualization of the lyrics. I'd like to hear it as a song thou It gives me the impression it should be lyrics ...

I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. I think it could have been longer too but it's interesting to me. I will continue to read more when time allows. ...