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Re: Nature art!!
I believe you should post some more pictures for us artistic folk to review! I loved these pictures especially the flower with the dew (or rain drops). I love those ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: The Dreamwalker - prologue (short)
I really love the writing style and can't wait 'til I have time to read more of your writings you already have posted. It is well written except the grammar ...
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Re: Friends, Dreams and Training (Chapter 2)
Here's what I saw as I read: Noah lay in his bed, staring up at the ceiling. His clock said 5am, his eyes were wide Is his clock on the ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: I think I like it here :)
Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoyin the site! They are doign a great job! I'm fairly new as well and I think we're following each other now! Maybe? Anyway, ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: April joining in April?
Welcome to YWS! :D Can't wait to review your work!
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: What If It's Fate?
You did a great job on the poem! I love the 9 syllabal pattern. Great job. I didn't see any grammar errors but I'm not an expert! Nothing wrong stood ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: My Life As Hanna
Pretty good story. I htink you could make this into a novel. The only thing I see is that it reminds me of Hannah Montana. Any relation? Was it inspired ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Why I Did It
I noticed this was posted a LONG time ago but I am pretty new so I will still review what I think. I love it! Yes, a few corrections already ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Eyes
I want to see more of this storyline! It is interesting. Some points are confusing that M&C pointed out, but I see great potential. I want to see more and ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra Chapter 3
Chapter 3: The Beach & Melanie Joe and I reached the edge of the beach. “Will you die if you totally dehydrate or don’t have water? What if you are ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra Chapter 2
OPENING or: ch 2 Joshua came up to the large hole that I had for a window in my room. “Alex, wake up!” Joshua was whispering with his hands leaning ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra chapter 1
Yea it probably does. Hopefully not Pirates of the Caribbean later either :O That's part of the novel problem I need to change things around so it's not so familiar ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Stealing Grace (Part 3 of 3)
That's cool! Glad you enjoyed it! I had problems wondering where to end the story at. I am beginnin to post my long novel that is so messed up. I ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: I'm a castle
I really like this poem. I didn't notice any major grammar mistakes, but honestly didn't go back to look and check the grammar. I'm not the greatest at grammar checking. ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hopes
I'm more of a story person and not great at poetry but wanted to say my opinion for review. I enjoyed this poem. It is to the point and I ...
Apr 4, 2011