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This is a nice poem. You did good on the stanzas and the rhyming. :) Keep up the good work.

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Sorry for the loss :( Keep strong! You wrote a very good poem, keep it up! I liked the questions and as others have said, that could be hard questions ...

I will review your poem today! I think most if not all of the constructive criticizm has been pointed out and the grammar too. I love this and hope to ...

I really likeds these, very creative.When the page loaded, the first one made me think of an alien owl but I think it needs color too. :)

As the others have said, I really liked the poem. You're good at expressing your feelings and emotions, etc. Keep up the awesome writing

I liekd this poem. If I had wrote it I would have put that I avoid work on my computer, and skip onto YWS. HAHA. You did a good job! ...

Poems can be well written but with too big words. If the average reader can't understand the words they won't like the poem because they aren't going to stop and ...

I didn't see anything wrong with Zelda one except for the small shoulder on teh horse that has already been pointed out. In the game I don't think he has ...

Well I must say this is a very good piece. I could feel the emotion and work you put into it. All the constructive criticizm has already been pointed out ...

I'm reading as I sit here eating Whopper Robin Eggs..mmm chocolate...anyway..here's the few grammar points I noticed: Mommy, come quick!!” Jay You only need one exclamation point. Two is no ...

WOW! I think I tried one time when I had writer's block to write a story about a girl with writer's it didn't go passed the first line. It was ...

If you ever post anything in the wrong area, moderators will relocate it for you if they notice. I've done it by accident, like posting a novel in a short ...

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You wrote a very good poem. I don't see any grammar mistakes. It kept me reading so it was very interesting. Keep up the good work. I think anyone could ...