katchaerin

Love the concept. =] However, just like what lily said, changing from 1st to 3rd person could confuse the readers. I know I'm not that good too, but I think ...

Me – the new house maid >:C The sun was peeking through my bedroom window when I woke up to seven a.m. It was a supposed to be wonderful Saturday ...

Well, the others have already stated some of the comments I'd like to say, so I guess I'd just have to say : WONDERFUL and CUTE work! Keep it up. ...

wow. I feel your pain. I really like it. XD The way you wrote it was really good. It seems like you're telling us your story without the intention of ...

NTSS (Normal Things Suck Sometimes) I’m pretty relieved when I got to school looking perfectly normal. If I met someone new, I knew that he wouldn’t suspect a thing about ...

Thanks, jungle! XD I need your comments. I already edited some parts, by the way. p.s. I'm glad you liked it. I'm posting some more (the next chapters).

My Cell phone is Cell POO I can’t believe this! Do you remember a time when you wished the whole world except you stood still and you’d put things where ...