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Re: Music while you write?
I usually write in silence. If I listen to some music (especially with lyrics), I tend to sing along. XD HAHA. Same goes with studying. =]
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Untitled (Chapter 1) Draft
OH! By the way, I'm really sorry I couldn't suggest a name for your novel. I'm not really good in titles, and I still don't know how this story goes. ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Untitled (Chapter 1) Draft
Hey, there! Welcome to YWS! Nice piece of work. XD You're good, and I love it. I loved how you delivered the story. But just a few nitpickers: “No,” sob ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Hi! :-)
Hi romanticgothic! Welcome to YWS! Hope you'd have fun in here! I love reading too! And I LOVE FILMS! Gothic is cool.XD Can't wait to read your poems, novels and ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: A Walk to Remember
Hello! This is my first shot in short story-writing. I'm not that good, I know. I'll be waiting for your reviews. Thanks! XD -KAT
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: My Sign is Vital, My Hands are Cold (kind of re-written)
Wonderful piece of work. XD I made up my mind long ago, Rissa. It was my choice to make the bond. One life is a small price to pay for ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Enough!
Phew! I got scared, I admit. This is a great piece of work. It's direct. Write more, okay?
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Lies Like Roses and Thorns
Wonderful work, Silentpages! That first line made me want to read the whole story so badly. It's immediate. I just simply love your stories. It's not too common. XD Keep ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Never a Happy Ending
Hey silentpages! Great work. XD You definitely brought me to another world. Fairytales always tell about happy mermaids and stuff, but you did the opposite. Awh, how sad it is ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: On the Edge
Hey there! So, this is a true story? T-T I could hardly imagine how hard it is for the MC to get through these things. Oh well, I would just ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
Hey lava! Glad I found you. XD Could you review my novel? Thanks so much. THANKS! Those are chapters 1, 2 and 3. :) -KAT
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: She's such a Drama Queen Chapter 1
Hey there! Ooo, I like it. XD I love the dialogue, although It's kind of weird. You described her in the first paragraph as a really shy girl. It seemed ...
Jul 19, 2010 -
Re: the elementals (title curtosy of rocksmith)
Hey there! I love the way you started your story. It wasn't dragging. The way you started it captured my attention at once. :] Seraphina= a 14 year old stubborn ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: A Piece of Cake (Glowing)
Hey there! Wow. Good job on writing a story with only 103 words. Must be hard. XD I wonder where the conflict is, though. The girl seeing wax drip on ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: I'll Never Understand(edited)
WOW. Nice story. Almost made me cry. Haha. Kidding. But, it really IS good. The concept was great - how things were hard to understand (yeah, things like that) “That ...
Jul 16, 2010
