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Re: Jealousy
Hey there! When that feeling tries to come, I beg you to push it awayOr else it will eat at you day after dayYou’ll yell and you’ll cry, making a ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Jodie’s House
Hey there! I would just like to say that this is quite good! Simple and direct. XD Daddy is always working.Mummy is always with Bobby. So Jodie pours and pours. ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: A Girl Dismantled
I like your descriptions. XD However, I couldn't quite get it. Haha. Sorry, I'm dumb when it comes to poems. But good writing! Woot! Keep it up! -KAT
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Love
Hey there! Splendid job! XD I loved how you described Love at first, then the point when love seemed to fade, then appear again. Then love comes again Like being ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Friends
Hey there! I loved the poem - how cimple and direct it is. He loves her and she loves him But they’re tired of the pain So they don’t tell ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Harana (Serenade)
Hey there! I just wrote this short story for you to know how courtship is in the Philippines before modernization. Enjoy! (I hope XD) Year 1800 "Nadia," Imelda, my older ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: I think I love an assassin
Everyone will fall in love. Fact. Love is unconditional. Fact. You will find love in the most unlikely places. Fact. These three facts used to get me through the day. ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Totally Strange (1) *edited*
Hey there! I like it. It's simple and it's cute. I agree with SporkPunk with errors on punctuation, but other than that, it's good. Maybe you could let us know ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: Fate: Chapter one
Hey there! I like this. However, something lacks in here. I guess it lacks the story-reader connection. You should add action. There was a monster right in front of me. ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The Break Up
WOW. I love this. Poor man. He's dead and his wife thinks he cheated. But still, poor woman. She thinks her husband left them, then she learns he's dead. Well, ...
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: A Glimpse of Hope
WONDERFUL! SIMPLY WONDERFUL! I feel for your MC. It must be really hard to be in her shoes. Her parents sure aren't acting like parents. It was written well. After ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Heart Shaped River Rocks
WOW! cute poem! ooo. So that's the tanka. If you say it's addictive, I might as well try that too. XD GOOD JOB! -KAT
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Removed
Hey Rach! Wow. This short story is cool. The MC's voice is unique. I mean, it hooks us up. It hooked me up, even though I don't like super natural ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Why Red?
Hey there, card dragon. XD It was nice having able to tell a story in a story. I like it. It seems like you're writing this for the young ones. ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: July 25 (GMT) is a Reviewing Sunday
OMG! I'M PSYCHED! I can't wait for reviewing Sunday to come. This would be my very first reviewing Sunday, so I better be ready. HAHA. And also, I can't wait ...
Jul 20, 2010
