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Re: Love Poem
Is this suppose to be a poem or you just need a help from a math problem? HAHA. I had to laugh at this. Yeah, you have a point. Well, ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Too Late
HWOWH! I felt as if I was going to cry too. HONEST! It seemed odd, however, repeating that the tears were hot and salty, and it tickles. Nevertheless, it's pretty ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: My First Ever Poem (from when I was seven!)
Hey there! So you were seven when you wrote this? Awesome! I wrote poetry when I was seven too, but I wasn't this good. Actually, I don't even think I ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Juliet diary entry (Romeo and Juliet)
Hey there! I could not believe I understood this English. Ha ha. I like it! Although this is supposed to be Juliet's diary, I agree to the others that say ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Leap (Green Eyes)
Hey there! I liked it! The leather is warm and sticky under my legs, and the taxi smells like B.O. and cheap cologne, but I don’t care. My lips are ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Art Finished Over the Past Year
art #1: WOW! I like it! The water at the bottom does seem to reflect sharply, though. But if I look at it closely, it seems as if it's another ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: As Little Kids
ooo. So, this is only the prologue? Good, then. Ha ha. I can't wait to read more of it. XD I love it. It's realistic and simple - the typical ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Heart of Stone<3
Hey there! I liked it. It's simple. There are very few mistakes, but over all, it was great. Keep writing, okay? I'd love to read more. -KAT
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: V.I.C.T.O.R.I.A.
Well, it lacks something else, and I don't know what it is. I guess I'll know it when I read it. XD Sorry. I actually didn't get it the first ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Rice Crispies
Okay, this isn't too good. I wrote it a couple years ago for school and then lost it... and then found it again :D Glad you found it! Please tell ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Chapter One (DRAFT)
Sitting firmly like a Tudor in his old throne-couch in front of his 21 inch TV watching his favorite TV series, Rey, an eighteen year-old fearless lad wearing his LA ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: I Keep you - by Nicole B
This is the first rhyming poem I had read in like, two weeks. Wow. It really is refreshing to read a poem like this. Tell your friend that this is ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: I love you
She was beautiful. it should be is (if the MC still finds her beautiful) Her light green eyes full of passion every time she kissed him. Her light brown hair ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: My Eyes See You.
Hey there! I love it. XD Like the others had said, this seemed like a perfectly good story. =] Awh. I could feel the emotions you wanted us to feel. ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: The Jewish Princess (Title Tenative)
Hey there. I like your plot. The holocaust... Anyways, although you tried to write your story in 100% dialogue, it's still confusing. XD I'm not saying you should change it. ...
Jul 27, 2010
