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I started reading and got so confused, I didn't understand what was going on or what was happening. And then the full moon confused me even more, who was behind ...

As I was reading this, I spotted quite a few grammar mistakes but I didn't see them to be the immediate problem - the dialogue was. It sounds forced, almost ...

The name freaked me out. That is the first thing I have to say. At first, I was thinking 'why would Hell need a forest?' And then other sinister thoughts ...

This captivated my attention beyond a doubt. At first, I was asking myself who the person was at the start. It sounds like a girl but I could have been ...