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I started reading and got so confused, I didn't understand what was going on or what was happening. And then the full moon confused me even more, who was behind ...

As I was reading this, I spotted quite a few grammar mistakes but I didn't see them to be the immediate problem - the dialogue was. It sounds forced, almost ...

Prologue Even the moon, in all its power, couldn’t force its light through the clouds that stormed their way across the sky. The streetlamps flickered miserably, their light bulbs nearing ...

The name freaked me out. That is the first thing I have to say. At first, I was thinking 'why would Hell need a forest?' And then other sinister thoughts ...

Even the moon, in all its power, couldn’t force its light through the clouds that stormed their way across the sky. The streetlamps flickered miserably, their light bulbs nearing the ...

This captivated my attention beyond a doubt. At first, I was asking myself who the person was at the start. It sounds like a girl but I could have been ...

i•den•ti•ty - The collective aspect of the set of characteristics by which a thing is definitively recognisable or known. He stood amongst a crowd of people, his eyes focussed on ...

@Calligraphy. Thank you for that link, I'm just going to go over there and check it out. Everyone on this site is so nice! Man, I wish some of my ...

Right, so I've written a book, like probably all the people on here have. But I sent it to a total of 15 agents, and have got a crushing no ...