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Chapter 5 They’ve given me a journal to keep but the entire book only consists of these next seven days. I don’t understand anything anymore. My entire beliefs have been ...

I normally hate reading first person novels but, because this was posted in Fantasy Novels, I thought I'd give it a go and wow am I glad I did. This ...

He woke with a gasp, his hand stretched out over his heart. He could feel it beating, furiously pumping the blood around his body in an effort to keep him ...

Before I say anything else, I guess I should tell you that I haven't even read the other parts to your story so this is me only commenting on this ...

I think the first word that came to mind when I read the first bit was 'cliche *yawn*' but I was proven wrong as I read on. At first, I ...

@Arah, thanks for the warm welcome! It's been a while but I think I've managed to get a good grip off this website and how it works. I actually have ...

You're doing reviews for food - AWESOME. Dude, totally check out the novel I'm writing ATM (up to chapter three already WOOP). Sorry I can't link it, the iPod can ...

The plane landed at precisely 08.02 am on the 12th of March 2010. The day after Bug’s life had taken a considerable turn for the worse. Although, in the country ...

I thought this was pretty emotional and, seeing as how I hate anything emotional, I was surprised that I found myself wanting to read on, albeit only a little. The ...

Okay, so I'm not going to do an intensive review (as there's been one done above me and I agree with every point), I do have some points to make. ...

The events of the night before rolling around inside his mind, Bug groaned and twisted around in his bed for the hundredth time. His covers now wrapped him from his ...

This was good, it intrigued me and I don't really get intrigued much. I have a few qualms though: My first one is the fact that you've used quotation marks ...

This was a good read. I don't normally read stuff from the first person point of view because I feel that a third person point of view gives the writer ...

@StoryWeaver - thank you for the analysis of my chapter. However, I would say that this novel ha already been written? (If you check, I've uploaded the prologue if you ...

‘My name is Antonio Khan. I live in London. I have a hot girlfriend and a cool best friend. That’s all that you really need to know about me.’ ‘So ...