kashraj19

I have written a poem, kindly post your comments.

What will people say? I am a father, who loves her daughter from the bottom of his heart, There is a boy she loves, and cares for him a lot, ...

Hi this is an extract from my story- the first meeting Please let me know your valuable feedbacks. Monsoons had conquered the city of Mumbai- traffic jams, dented roads and ...

I loved the begining, it grabbed the reader. However, the characters were not able to hold my attention. The flow was slower and I felt like skipping a few lines ...

Some portions were heart warming like, your comparison with a vase. That part was touching and it revealed your personal situation during your child hood. The story could have been ...

I have included an extract from my book, Stolen Moments. Please review and let me know the changes required. There is a stunning resemblance, in the behavior of the wind ...